I gave the moodboard a more crisp, sharp appearance with the use of a white background behind the figure.
I also got some feedback that there was a bit too much going on - as my collection is very busy but not that busy.
I think that it looks much better and conveys my idea much clearer.
**** After speaking to Jen, she pointed out that moodboards should generally have initial inspiration images on them, so I have altered my mood board to the image below. I think it makes more sense as it shows where my ideas came from and will also correlate to my colour/fabric board to indicate where I chose the colour palette that I'm working with from.
I'm really happy with how it has turned out and think it looks really cool, while conveying the attitude of my collection and still showing the initial source of inspiration. I may try adding some font possibly...
But for now it looks like this;
I have just re-considered and I think that the black is too harsh, so have altered it to the colour palette below.
